tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7857911698381538023.post1419566942036948877..comments2014-02-04T06:27:38.540-08:00Comments on Lunchtime Writer's Club: The Flying Monster Truck - AlexKellyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08627434574960830542noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7857911698381538023.post-31096456130054269042011-11-01T09:47:04.681-07:002011-11-01T09:47:04.681-07:00Alex, you did a wonderful job on this book. We lov...Alex, you did a wonderful job on this book. We love it, from your Family on the farm in Alabama.Gabby, Daddy, Grandma Alice, Brothers Eliah and Dylannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7857911698381538023.post-6633606553324682902011-10-30T13:47:11.521-07:002011-10-30T13:47:11.521-07:00Great details, you must really love flying monster...Great details, you must really love flying monster trucks. Does your monster truck have a name?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7857911698381538023.post-63049420072089935372011-10-30T11:34:40.417-07:002011-10-30T11:34:40.417-07:00That's a good story. Well thought out, nice pr...That's a good story. Well thought out, nice progression, and definitely a page turner. A pleasure to read.<br /><br />Good job!Smaughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06332773968698876023noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7857911698381538023.post-60645392532523760822011-10-30T08:15:47.105-07:002011-10-30T08:15:47.105-07:00The story has a happy ending and I like happy endi...The story has a happy ending and I like happy endings. I like the pictures very much. Some of the sentences are verrrrry long! Good job 3rd graders. <br /><br />JennyJennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04100475037536535510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7857911698381538023.post-48662466177757526352011-10-30T08:13:32.715-07:002011-10-30T08:13:32.715-07:00I like the pictures. The end of the story is happy...I like the pictures. The end of the story is happy and I like happy endings. Some of those sentences are verrrrrry long! Good job 3rd graders.Jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04100475037536535510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7857911698381538023.post-77179784648196971372011-10-28T08:14:22.355-07:002011-10-28T08:14:22.355-07:00Very nice job Alex!!
Mrs. ListonVery nice job Alex!!<br /><br />Mrs. ListonAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7857911698381538023.post-16799960286097025082011-10-27T19:17:17.339-07:002011-10-27T19:17:17.339-07:00Very clever Alex. Keep up the good work!Very clever Alex. Keep up the good work!Tammyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02969471446847197879noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7857911698381538023.post-36036468966687282802011-10-27T19:08:50.644-07:002011-10-27T19:08:50.644-07:00Awesome story - keep up the good work and remember...Awesome story - keep up the good work and remember to edit before you publish. Just some minor spellings - but other than that - pretty cool story. I like the way the trucks and planes and houses pop up like a pop-up book on the screen - that is pretty cool; wish I could get my books to do that. Hope you all enjoy your gifts that you should be receiving soon - Mrs. E :)<br /><br />Ma America, The Travelin' Maven<br />Author of the JGDS, 50-state, mystery, trivia series<br />Where will the adventure take you next?<br />http://jgdsseries.blogspot.com<br />http://jgdsseries.weebly.comelysabethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07052446855668120700noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7857911698381538023.post-16086409247655149332011-10-27T18:53:06.931-07:002011-10-27T18:53:06.931-07:00Excellent story. Keep up the good work.Excellent story. Keep up the good work.Mindyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01272948206344928446noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7857911698381538023.post-8791863726486452172011-10-27T18:22:58.235-07:002011-10-27T18:22:58.235-07:00Nice job guys! Keep having fun writing. The more...Nice job guys! Keep having fun writing. The more you write, the better reader you become. The more you read, the better writer you become. Keep up the good work!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7857911698381538023.post-49398348469301649142011-10-27T15:57:07.413-07:002011-10-27T15:57:07.413-07:00I loved this book. I hope you write many more.I loved this book. I hope you write many more.mweisburghhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16318750204253355755noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7857911698381538023.post-39283332191599594952011-10-27T14:17:39.629-07:002011-10-27T14:17:39.629-07:00Such a cute story! Good job Alex!Such a cute story! Good job Alex!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7857911698381538023.post-83040939594777616752011-10-27T13:55:19.952-07:002011-10-27T13:55:19.952-07:00Alex, I am incredibly proud of you! Great job!
Mr...Alex, I am incredibly proud of you! Great job!<br />Mrs. JKellyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08627434574960830542noreply@blogger.com