We are a group of third grade students from Indiana. We meet during lunch to write and publish original stories. Please leave a comment to help keep us inspired.
Nice job guys! Keep having fun writing. The more you write, the better reader you become. The more you read, the better writer you become. Keep up the good work!
Awesome story - keep up the good work and remember to edit before you publish. Just some minor spellings - but other than that - pretty cool story. I like the way the trucks and planes and houses pop up like a pop-up book on the screen - that is pretty cool; wish I could get my books to do that. Hope you all enjoy your gifts that you should be receiving soon - Mrs. E :)
Ma America, The Travelin' Maven Author of the JGDS, 50-state, mystery, trivia series Where will the adventure take you next? http://jgdsseries.blogspot.com http://jgdsseries.weebly.com
Alex, I am incredibly proud of you! Great job!
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Such a cute story! Good job Alex!
ReplyDeleteI loved this book. I hope you write many more.
ReplyDeleteNice job guys! Keep having fun writing. The more you write, the better reader you become. The more you read, the better writer you become. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteExcellent story. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteAwesome story - keep up the good work and remember to edit before you publish. Just some minor spellings - but other than that - pretty cool story. I like the way the trucks and planes and houses pop up like a pop-up book on the screen - that is pretty cool; wish I could get my books to do that. Hope you all enjoy your gifts that you should be receiving soon - Mrs. E :)
ReplyDeleteMa America, The Travelin' Maven
Author of the JGDS, 50-state, mystery, trivia series
Where will the adventure take you next?
http://jgdsseries.blogspot.com
http://jgdsseries.weebly.com
Very clever Alex. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteVery nice job Alex!!
ReplyDeleteMrs. Liston
I like the pictures. The end of the story is happy and I like happy endings. Some of those sentences are verrrrrry long! Good job 3rd graders.
ReplyDeleteThe story has a happy ending and I like happy endings. I like the pictures very much. Some of the sentences are verrrrry long! Good job 3rd graders.
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That's a good story. Well thought out, nice progression, and definitely a page turner. A pleasure to read.
ReplyDeleteGood job!
Great details, you must really love flying monster trucks. Does your monster truck have a name?
ReplyDeleteAlex, you did a wonderful job on this book. We love it, from your Family on the farm in Alabama.
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