Tuesday, November 8, 2011

The Little Polar Bear... LOST! by Griffin

One dark night there was a little polar bear standing with his mother.  The ice was starting to break so the little polar bear was scared.

They heard crick crack.  The ice was breaking more . The ice broke apart and separated them.

Then the little polar bear was lost in the ocean.  He saw fish in the water and decided he was hungry.  He tried to catch the fish but they were too fast.  He saw bigger fish and he thought he could catch them but they were too fast.  Then he saw a big iceberg so he climbed on and he saw even bigger fish on the other side.  He tried to catch them but he couldn’t.  But he saw a bigger iceberg and climbed onto it to rest.  When he woke up he saw his friend so his polar bare on a iceberg his friend climbed on the other iceberg and they played games.  His friend said no one ever returned to  home .  they played until they were hungry and then they ate fish.  Then they went back to sleep.    When they woke up, they were home with their families.



  1. One little sentence that is off somehow but other than that, a wonderful story. Hope you keep on writing and coming up with new ideas constantly. Who knows? Maybe one day you will be a famous author - Mrs. E :)

    Ma America, The Travelin' Maven
    Author of the JGDS, 50-state, mystery, trivia series
    Train oF Clues (the predecessor to the state series)
    Where will the adventure take you next?

  2. I loved your book!
    It was a spectacular book!