Thursday, October 27, 2011

The Flying Monster Truck - Alex

13 comments:

  1. Alex, I am incredibly proud of you! Great job!
    Mrs. J

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  2. Such a cute story! Good job Alex!

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  3. I loved this book. I hope you write many more.

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  4. Nice job guys! Keep having fun writing. The more you write, the better reader you become. The more you read, the better writer you become. Keep up the good work!

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  5. Excellent story. Keep up the good work.

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  6. Awesome story - keep up the good work and remember to edit before you publish. Just some minor spellings - but other than that - pretty cool story. I like the way the trucks and planes and houses pop up like a pop-up book on the screen - that is pretty cool; wish I could get my books to do that. Hope you all enjoy your gifts that you should be receiving soon - Mrs. E :)

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  7. Very clever Alex. Keep up the good work!

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  8. Very nice job Alex!!

    Mrs. Liston

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  9. I like the pictures. The end of the story is happy and I like happy endings. Some of those sentences are verrrrrry long! Good job 3rd graders.

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  10. The story has a happy ending and I like happy endings. I like the pictures very much. Some of the sentences are verrrrry long! Good job 3rd graders.

    Jenny

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  11. That's a good story. Well thought out, nice progression, and definitely a page turner. A pleasure to read.

    Good job!

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  12. Great details, you must really love flying monster trucks. Does your monster truck have a name?

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  13. Gabby, Daddy, Grandma Alice, Brothers Eliah and DylanNovember 1, 2011 at 9:47 AM

    Alex, you did a wonderful job on this book. We love it, from your Family on the farm in Alabama.

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